Preliminary task can be seen below:
In comparison with my preliminary video, I feel that my final video is much better and not as simplistic.
Improvements
- I larger variety of shots were used in my two-minute opening - During the progress of this task I have learnt how to use a wider range of camera shots and angles.
- The use of narration - the preliminary task shows a simple conversation between two people. I managed to develop my audio skills so I was able to use a voice-over.
- The length of the media - I struggled in making my opening two minutes long. However I have improved in my ability to fill time with flashbacks and other shots.
- The story line - the story-line in my opening works better than in my preliminary task. In the preliminary task we didn't find out much about what will happen whereas my opening senses that the film will be about Georgia changing her life.
What could have been made better?
- Many people commented on how the dark scene (below) didn't make sense.
This scene was supposed to represent a night in which Georgia's life dramatically changed, later in the film we would discover what happened and how she changes it.
I think that I could have portrayed this much better if the main actress (Caroline Lovick) was available more often. Also this could have improved if I had given myself more time.
- I also feel that the scene showing Georgia's past life (below) lasted much too long.
I used the montage to fill time as I did not record enough footage on days where Caroline dressed as a homeless. I like to think that I did manage to fit suitable clips into the space and that i made it work.
- Overall I think that my opening could have been made better if I had made a time-plan and consumed my free time better.
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